All Comments on 'Working For My Pimp Ch. 01'

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charlesjocharlesjoalmost 13 years ago
Proud of you

Good girl.

c xx

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Good story. That last line had me going - the thought of you fucking father and son, too much! We need some more on this please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
more

pease add more to this

jpalsgrjpalsgralmost 13 years ago
Interesting

Interesting start, needs background set up and character development. looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
I don't read stories written in the first person.

Which is rather a pity because it just might be a good story.

Signed in blood

Moog McMoog.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
plz add more

very very good girl ;)

Damien

ThomasLordThomasLordover 10 years ago
Good Start

Very appealing start. I'm anxious to read the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Please continue this theme

Really enjoyed your unusual style.

Anonymous
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