by kutekitten
Thank You !! I really enjoy reading well written stories from a woman's point of view. Because I am an older man who thinks like a man, I can only enter the mind of an aroused woman by reading their thoughts. You have made that journey, a very pleasant one today.
You are very talented, and I hope that you continue to share your emotions with us.
I am a fiction writer and enjoy erotic stories written from a woman's POV. Male writers frequenly have difficulty capturing the emotions of women characters in romantic and erotic situations.
This story captures the emotions in a first time encounter for a woman. It doesn't matter it it's true, if if feels plausable.
The story may have played better if there was more conflict between before the erotic sequences began.