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Grey BeardGrey Beardabout 20 years ago
Great Story

Thank You !! I really enjoy reading well written stories from a woman's point of view. Because I am an older man who thinks like a man, I can only enter the mind of an aroused woman by reading their thoughts. You have made that journey, a very pleasant one today.

You are very talented, and I hope that you continue to share your emotions with us.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Well done from a woman's POV

I am a fiction writer and enjoy erotic stories written from a woman's POV. Male writers frequenly have difficulty capturing the emotions of women characters in romantic and erotic situations.

This story captures the emotions in a first time encounter for a woman. It doesn't matter it it's true, if if feels plausable.

The story may have played better if there was more conflict between before the erotic sequences began.

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