All Comments on 'Working Girls Pt. 02'

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RapidResponderRapidResponderover 8 years ago
Not very good

You have no future as a writer.

centauri4centauri4over 3 years ago

The middle section of this second chapter is rough and moves overly quick, the Frat boys group scene, to fast and to messy.

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