All Comments on 'Working into the Family Ch. 01'

if there is no mom son action the then not incest, but lesbian is ok so label as needed.

Learn English.

anonymous you need to read the top line chapter 1.its to be continued.

This story is HOT. I liked it but the broken english almost made it unreadable. I had to ignore the syntax errors and grammaticle mistakes that were made. I would suggest you team up with a good editor to polish it and correct the errors you made in this one. There is serious potential for a very hot series but please make sure you get the help you need to make it more readable. Thanks. I hope this comment helps you.

Nice start, bur incoclusive story. Too easy and without action she jump into mothers bed.

Boring & totally inane!

Because the author has not written anything in almost 13 years, there is no point in commenting on this story.