All Comments on 'Working It Off'

Five star story! Great stuff!

In your bio you state you've written other stories, please post some of them. I love the graphic details in this work, your others must be just as good.

I want the next chapter, quick!

... Only because I couldn't give it six. Panther Fan.

It was so hot that I came twice one after the other I have never been able to do that before.

Oh my... fantastically written. Love the gritty details. Love how she gets used! Gulp...very very bold to have such a gross old dude. How many would have written a Christian Grey character? Loved the ending. When will we see more?

Detailed and thorough account of a hostile meeting. Ol' Reggie certainly puts the fear up Rose along with his cock and semen. Can she get any payback for her suffering?

...story I've read in a while. Hot, dirty, venal...and kinda funny, too. Beautifully crafted erotica.

Can see, faintly, possibilities for sequels that are just as satisfying to read.

Well done, and thank you.

This is amazing writing. Great descriptions of a humiliating fuck. I've gotta check out some more of your work.

Please write the sequel or another. I admire the thought that went into this and the progression.

Omg MORE.

Let us make her pay more debt off with old men who are going to bang her every day every possible position one after the other all men in village are in her house for porn filming her or hubby and his family will find out the young boys from school who have been first to black mail her seeing filming her been used by her sister friends while hubby worked away so little 14 y olds have been given an extra time to make her be fucked by every homiess tramps then old very old perverts,grandads and his old friends and now daddy's family friends and the family men of the sides of wifes brood use their cocks on her,then she runs with her old uncles to never be seen again. Im sure i saw a video of her in camp blue movies

Damn would've been nice to read more ..$100 a session ...wanna hear her get pimped out properly

I don't understand the craze for tiny women. Five feet? And he wanted her shaved down there aswell. This want for adult women to look like little girls I find a bit disturbing. I only got as far as page 2. I was surprised she didn't shriek and start trembling big time when he asked if she'd ever been fucked. She of course knew it was coming, but to be asked outright like that I don't think is something she would have taken so lightly. I also don't understand the need to quickly get her clothes off, but other than all that I like what I've read so far - R

Seriously needs a part 2..