All Comments on 'Working Mary Over'

Mary is a very bad girl

It doesn't always take a long story to make it good. Sometimes the longer it is, it is full of background you don't need or desire. Good job.

Well worth the read. As for length, it certainly could use a follow-up or two.

I was thrilled with this story if not for the length! I'd love to see a sequel, explore all the things he'll subject Mary to in their newfound relationship! She's so bad for such a good girl! Very good story, well written, I am impressed! Still, please write more on it, Thanks

Would have liked more groping and finger penetration below her clothes before stripping

This story was stupid. There was no reality to it. You fucking suck motherfucker.

Going to masturbate now .. thank you ...

I liked this story. Sexy and to the point. Would have liked to see more about him coming inside her.

Fantastic. Just fantastic. I would actually like to see this story continue.

Good story, well constructed and good to see yet another conservative , butter wouldn't melt in the mouth, wannabe slut found out and given a working over.