All Comments on 'Working Vacation Pt. 01'

why would she go so far with a jerk? delay him but leave him with his junk

hanging out, a perfect put down.

What better way to get the "perfect timing" guy LATE for a very important date?!!??

How did he explain why he was so late for that so-important T-time?

A few continuity errors: Greg when it should have been Tyler, that kind of thing. Looking forward to the next installment.

Very good, especially the build up, cant wait to see the next installment.

Thanks for feedback. Fixed the name thing and a few other details. Curious as to where people think it's going.

Hated it. felt like a betrayal of Greg. originally gave it 2 *. reread and down graded to 1 *.