All Comments on 'Workout Challenge'

This looks like it's headed in a good direction. Now do we get character development or sex? Do you highten the tension or feed the beast?

Wonderful story. I would love to see where it goes.

I'm enjoying the characters and story and am interested in how it develops.

more!!!

Love the sexual tension! It is building up wonderfully. Please continue!

Very nicely done... this could have gotten skeavy back at the gym and it didn't... loved the touch on that. Can't wait to see where you go from here!

I think there are a large number of men (including me) who workout their body AND their fantasies at the gym. it would be great to have some additional fuel for those fires.

thank goodness the scene ate the gym stopped where it did...i mean it was hot but foursome is not my scene and i would've stopped reading then which would be a shame since i like your stories....hope you do continue logan and raney's romance though

That the build up is sometimes the best part and you wrote it wonderfully! I would love to see more

That was fun and hot.

Would be a really good thing...

More please!

No, I, for one, don’t feel any need to continue this story. I know I’ve had about all I want of it.

I can’t believe I’m the only one who can see the flip side of this story. A pretty, single woman, being forcibly detained in an empty gym late at night. Detained by four masked men who insist she eat food they prepared just for her. Jeez, people, has no body ever heard of rohypnal? This story reads more like a disaster than it does a romance.

creepy AF, glad you didn't extend this one further.