All Comments on 'World of Warcraft'

No plot, no development, not even something arousing. Unbelievable, laughable, and just plain weak.

An ok story, that sounds more like an anecdote.

I liked the story being told as if it were a real experience, except that it didn’t sound real to me. May be with a bit of polishing is would read better. Keep trying Flory, you’ll get there.

hi i also play. whats you persons name

Sorry, this doesn't really cut it. The story isn't entertaining, isn't believable (even to non-players), and suffers from poor grammar. Rework it a bit and try again.

No I don't mean this ina condecending way, but it sounds more like two freinds meeting for coffee reading a diary entry than anything really hot.

Either you a whore, or this is a fifteen year old boy bluffing.

Bullshit.

IF you ARE the woman, you and your friends need to grow the fuck up and stop practicaly cheating on your boyfriend.

If your the kid, I reccomend the same, except exchange BOYFRIEND with Hand.

Just curious, I usually play an Orc Hunter on Korialsraz, a PvE server. But now that I think of it, I most likely won't check this post agiain... But maybe others who stumble upon the page will be curious?

~Critter A.K.A, Dognan

Keep up the writing - I'd like to read more.

There aren't a lot of other stories on here with Warcraft themes, but I also wanted to let you know about mine, based on a web series called "The Guild" which has a Warcraft-ish theme.

It's called "Codex, brought to her knees" and I'd especially love to get your thoughts on it.

lol