All Comments on 'Worst Roommate Ch. 03'

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talldarkfellowtalldarkfellowabout 8 years ago
Bedroom Quidditch

I loved the Harry Potter joke. She's sensual, fun and naughty. He is in sooo much trouble.

One note: you're got a great writing style. Don't be afraid of going into more detail and changing scenes more than once in a chapter.

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