by nortythorts
I hope you will add to this with another chapter. Looking forward to it!
well written. I loved it looking forward to the rest of the story.
This writing is wonderful, but needs to be consummated-pun intended. The beautiful lead-up is almost wasted by the lack of a detailed ending.
Story stopped just when it was about to get interesting
I do so hope there will be lots more of it yet to be published! Thank you, five stars and please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter.
Very nice! I haven't read any more of your material, being unaware of it up to this point. However, if any of the rest is, at least, as good as this one has started out, I know that I'll be checking out some more. As for this installment, it goes without saying, that we've got to, at least have a sequel, and hopefully, a series. So, keep writing and we'll certainly keep reading.
I really enjoyed your story and can not wait to read the next installment in your story when it comes out.
Your fantasy was so intense and exciting with Mrs Martin and the shy young man. Exactly the sort of frothy things women like. I cant wait to read your second part. M
I enjoyed you story. Sorry it doesn't go all the way to the room,YET!! Looking forward to more of this situation.
Your story is incredibly hot. When I was a teen I had the hots for my neighbor and I often wondered if she was as good in bed as I imagined. I came many times thinking of her.
5 stars my friend.