All Comments on 'Would Like To Meet. No Strings Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Great story.

I hope you will add to this with another chapter. Looking forward to it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Loved it.

I really enjoyed it. So erotic and juicy.

Mary

Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 11 years ago
Just delightful

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
great story

well written. I loved it looking forward to the rest of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Left us hanging

This writing is wonderful, but needs to be consummated-pun intended. The beautiful lead-up is almost wasted by the lack of a detailed ending.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
great build uup to nothing.

Story stopped just when it was about to get interesting

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Ridiculously hot

Can't wait for the resolution.

mel_pomenemel_pomenealmost 11 years ago
What a marvellous story!

I do so hope there will be lots more of it yet to be published! Thank you, five stars and please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter.

gotranegotranealmost 11 years ago
Very Pleased With The Tease!

Very nice! I haven't read any more of your material, being unaware of it up to this point. However, if any of the rest is, at least, as good as this one has started out, I know that I'll be checking out some more. As for this installment, it goes without saying, that we've got to, at least have a sequel, and hopefully, a series. So, keep writing and we'll certainly keep reading.

NickoLanternNickoLanternalmost 11 years ago
Very well done!

I really enjoyed your story and can not wait to read the next installment in your story when it comes out.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Really gorgeous

Your fantasy was so intense and exciting with Mrs Martin and the shy young man. Exactly the sort of frothy things women like. I cant wait to read your second part. M

IwannadoitnowIwannadoitnowalmost 11 years ago
Yessssss!

Atta' boy, Dave! Go for all of it!

dirtyomandirtyomanover 10 years ago
Sooo? What Happens?

I enjoyed you story. Sorry it doesn't go all the way to the room,YET!! Looking forward to more of this situation.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Your story is incredibly hot. When I was a teen I had the hots for my neighbor and I often wondered if she was as good in bed as I imagined. I came many times thinking of her.

5 stars my friend.

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A bit more time on my hands these days, so trying to get back into writing after a break from it. Feedback welcome but please don't be offended if I don't enter into correspondence. I like to explore the pre-foreplay stage, how the sexual tension begins (and who by), whether ...