All Comments on 'Would You Like Fries With That?'

I absolutely loved your story! And, it had a happy ending, which made it even better! Keep up the good work.. you're an awesome writer!

A great write and a great read. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Fries are a must when you hit a fast food joint.. and i wouldnt mind a side of fries like that. Yum!

That was a nice story. You don't get many of them here.

It was actually believable they started having sex every lunchtime and it developed into a relationship.

I don't believe she inheireted money and stopped working at the fast food place.

It would have been more realsitic if she landed a job as branch manager somewhere else and then it developed into a realtionship. Apart from that one niggle, the story was great.

got a bit confusing at the end as obviously a big chunk of the story missing...would have been nice to know what was in the package and a bit of what went on afterwards....