by reddirtwriter
*glares at screen* what an cliffie! LOL. I could have read another 4 pages! :)
Feel so bad for Darrin. His low self-esteem and indecision just pour off the pages. But he has Mitch to love him and help him through his challenges. Good writing.
Red, NEVER STOP WRITING!!!! It was Awesome, as I have come to expect from you! Thanks, it made my day. Like M said, I could have kept reading all day!!!
Never stop writing. I love this story but as I always say... I hate cliffhangers.... hurry please
Loved it. Not sure if I want the drama that's, I'm sure, waiting to unfold. But keep writing.
... sex, love, fun, emotion, could it get much better? then u have credible characters, good plot and storyline ... just waiting for next chapter! way to go ...:) x
Nice to have an erotic storey of two real lovers. Please don't put too much emotion and drama into it. I just want to read about a loving couple, bare sex and cum eating.
While horseback riding, seriously??? Thank goodness for the internet - this is something I have to research. LOL
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Wow, wow, wow on the phone call! The old sob is dead, huh? Even in fiction... there's at least one less bigot in the world. I sure hope D will be able to see the upside of not having someone around who was an obvious threat. (Trust me, I know first hand. Just recently was practically dancing around singing "Ding dong the witch is dead...." from the Wizard of Oz. -- Hey folks, unless you've been there, don't judge. Not all of us are so fortunate as Mitch.)
I discovered this story on UDATZ and have just started re-reading it on literotica. You have a beautiful writing style and this is a very moving and poignant story. I have been emotionally brought to tears several times through the entire 28 chapters of all three series. Thank you for writing this wonderful story - there are parts especially when Josh and Trent join Darin and Mitch on the Oklahoma ranch that are really hard to get through without breaking down completely. The character development is splendid and I feel as though I know these guys intimately. Thank you for sharing your talented writing - it's wonderful.