All Comments on 'Wrath of Ah Puch'

Your focal point was very interesting, it came later int he story, causing the reader to shift. It was about Ah Puch, NOT Mael. You held my attention and it was fun reading. I read it because as an anthropology student, I was curious as to what you would discuss. Keep up the good work!

I liked the story. It reminded me of a porn Indy movie, Maybe The Temble of Dong.

Great story, fantastic build up in detail yet the story moves along keeping the reader on edge. One heck of a bondage and voyeur fantasy rolled into one. keep 'em comming Margin Walker!

This is a story I'd like to read before bedtime MMMMMMMMMGOOD!!

Wow, what a story, would love to have been elizabeth, have dreamed this kind of fantasy before, to actually see it in writing, well, hope you do some more like this one. From Rosie, carlyle44@hotmail.com

This is so fucking hot.