by writerzblocked
Yhis is one overly critical writer you put there in your story. Hope he bears no resemblance to the author...That's because the story was quite original and very funny, with the wimsical Crypto ray gun (or something like that) doing more or less - Ok, I am not telling. Read for yourself! And the end? How about:"The taxi driver suddenly turned around: "excuse me guys, I could not help overhearing, it's my judgement that you both arrived EXACTLY at the same time. i'm about to finish my shift why won't you both get in and I'll find the best route to make you both happy"...Some thing worked after all, I thought. - The end.