All Comments on 'Wrong Pt. 01'

Strong, well done, sexy, funny story. "I'm going to kick you in the balls so hard you'll be coughing sperm"? lmao...almost made me spew my coffee. Please let this stand on it's own. Don't want the ensuing drama to take away from this perfect story.

my heart-felt thanks to Girlinthemoon for for an amazing read. I am happy for the opportunity to read her sparkling dialogue, the chance to meet up with one more of her fascinating, screwed up young ladies. I am more than delighted to read absolutely the BEST description of sex posted to Literotica. I am happy that I have buffed my forearms at the gym. Thank you, GITM, you justify Literotica, that I own a computer, that I learned to read.

"This is so wrong."

Very hot and so sexy

you have a new follower ... very good story!!!

This is hot, but it also makes me sad. Some people are so selfish. The fact that he probably married her sister to be closer to her and then commence to punishing her (by treating her poorly and being emotionally absent from their marriage) for years for not being who he really wanted, just shows what kind of selfish jerk he truly is. If that had been anyone else besides her getting the cock, she'd be hurt and angry for her sister. And how can she pretend to care for her sister when in response to her devastation and tears she can only think about how her pussy clenches? You're a great writer. I guess that's how you can elicit such strong emotional responses. However, I'm with the other poster...leave it as is. Like this, its just a bit of erotica, where I guess anything goes. However, if this is to develop into romance, there is nothing you can do to make me want these two together ...even if the sister gave her full consent, which I don't see happening.

I remember reading this the first time you posted and kept looking for updates. PLEASE continue. It really is a good story. I will be following for sure.

and this is one of the best that I've ever read here. I've gotten to where I rarely give anyone 5 stars any more but I gave them to you for this one. You earned them. Well done!

I can't wait to read more.

The story start with a man being cruel; I found it to be totaly unpleasant.

I really enjoyed this. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Very well expressed emotions.

Another fantastic opening chapter. I have said it before, the characters so well written, the interplay outstanding.

WOW!

Thank you,

M1*****

This was my favorite of your old stories, I'm so glad you're reposting it!

I'm hooked! Please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter.

This is my first time reading this story and I must admit to loving it. I could feel all of their emotions- a great writer does that.

Such a goooooood read. Next chapter soon!!!!!

So so hot... Please keep going!

I loved reading the description of your encounters... Absolutely inspiring. Gonna go find my husband and fuck the hell out of him...

Love this more.

Not only is the story sexy and romantic, it's well written and edited, which makes it rare. Fantastic job!

The individual blocks, sections and paragraphs of this tale come at the reader like waves. Trying to oppose their collective force is foolish and futile. You go with it until the wave breaks denoting the end of a scene. Then swiftly paddle out again to catch the next one. These two knew on some level they had chemistry all along- and now their only just beginning to make up for the years of denial.

This is so easy to sum up but its the nuances and serve and volley dialogue that GIM imbues and embeds into this serial's fabric that carry the day. So wow. Just wow ( and five stars ). *****

Thank you for putting this one back up, it's one of my favorites!

But then, this is E.C., so I shouldn't be judgemental, I think.

They're perfectly paired for lust.

Love.....

A 5, it's too hot for anything less.

Great story. Interesting plot. Good dialogue inside and out. A strange entanglement, but one that will last longer than the first. Lust becomes love.

...introspection

and cracking-your-heart-open-to-look-at-your-guilt

is not entertaining to me.

And what I read Literotica for, is entertainment.

Paul in Oklahoma

I like the way a talented woman writes about sex and relationships. I’m a male but I don’t need to have the female character with DD boobs and the male with a 10” cock that’s thicker than a large cucumber. To me that is indicative of a male writer with little creativity. Just sayin’

I am anticipating following chapters feeling that this woman has boarded a train leaving the mountain top unaware it has no brakes.