All Comments on 'Wrong Side of the Bridge Ch. 01'

WOW!

Dark and intense. I like.

I HOPE THERE IS MORE TO THIS PLZ

I can't wait for more.

That was good, please don't make us wait too long for Chapter 2!

Really like it. Very touching and now I want more! Please don't keep us waiting for long. Very good description and please keep writing :)

Caught a definite Romeo and Juliet vibe but much, much darker. Hope to read the next chapter soon.

Very good beginning. It catches your interest early. The characters were well done and the plot is a classic wrong/right side of the tracks story. I look forward to more and just hope this won't be one of those 10 to 20 chapter stories.

I really like this story. Man, I feel so bad for Elijah. I want to know more about him, esp. his past. He seems like such a sweet guy. Why can't he make friends? Loving Damien; worried he's a drug addict. Excited about what's next.

Has a West Side Story vibe to it. In my city, the music scene is all super supportive and mostly friendly. These guys got it rough I guess.

I really like this story. It is different and intriguing. I agree with geemeedee that I'd like to know more about Eli. Why is he so alone? Has he always lived in this city? I'd also like to see more of Damien's friends to see if they really are supportive. The only reason I could see that they wouldn't be would be b/c he was hurting Damien before. That Pete was SUCH an asshole. I'm glad that Eli still had enough self-respect to think he deserved better. As awful as it is that he was attacked. I think Damien will show him what real caring is by taking care of him. Keep writing!

I also like the way this story is going it grips you so you can't stop and I agree with geemee too poor Eli why is he alone and so unaware? Onto chapter 2 to find out... Damien is gorgeous I want him hehe

I Like this. A lot. A whole lot.

Congrats, you got a post out of a dedicated non-commenter. Because this, is good. ...I really like.

This is my favorite kind of story. Slow building and believable.

great start

I, like many others liked the story very much..... Certainly my type of story... just love it... I even got a hard copy of all the three chapters...Plz submitt more of ur stories.... I await them.... Thanks for writting such a wonderful story....Thanks ... Thank you very much....

While I do enjoy this story I barely was able to continue after the description of Pete's penis. Ugh- the tiny bubbles? Sweet Mary and Joseph. At best its a skin condition but more likely an STD. So foul. I get that you have some interesting fetishes but that really isn't finding beauty in a flaw or defect so much as a reason to make sure you never give head in the dark! Ahhhhhhhhh!!

Pete and his icky cock and whatever disease he has.

Poor Eli.

I hope that Damien is nicer to him

loving it!!!