All Comments on 'Wrong Side of the Bridge Ch. 03'

I love your story

Well written and I love the way it ended good on you Eli

Is this the end? If it is then it was a great story! Looking forward to more stories from you :D

MORE MORE MORE PLZ

If so, it ended on a very positive note. Cool.

You can't end any better than Eli and Damien declaring their love for each other and starting a new life together. Oh, and confronting Pete about his cheating and lies helped. The only thing I wish was that you'd have given us more background on them.

I hope there is more but I don't want bad things to happen to screw it all up, cant help being a sentimental fool and loving my HEA. Just one thing, if there are more chapters, I for one would appreciate a little heads up if anything bad is coming the guy's way. Thanks for sharing your talent.

Honestly this has had me hooked. I would love for more.

I have a feeling this is the end and I'm sad for that. It was such a good story. Well-written and you developed the characters so well. You really made them come alive and grow together. I was excited when I saw the next chapter each time. I look forward to more of your work!

A really wonderful story. I enjoyed it very much. Good people, good story, good sex. What else do you need? Thank you.

This story was soooo good!! So sweet and hott at the same time.

Awesome job!!

Hope to see more stories from you soon!

:)

Your story is easy to follow. It doesn't jump from here to there and you had me hooked. When I saw that there was a new chapter... kinda made me happy :)

..."Holy shit, that was amazing."!! The story was perfect just as you wrote it, I don't need a lot of background baggage, I look at it more as a snapshot into this time of their lives.

I have to tell you too that I absolutely love it when an author finishes a story before posting. I love the anticipation, it keeps me thinking of the story the entire day while waiting until tomorrow to find out what happens next… and then the feeling of joy when the story is there the next morning! It really keeps me in the moment so thank you, thank you for that!! Like some of the others have commented, not sure if this is the end or not - it would be a great place to end so they get their HEA - but if it's not then I'm so looking forward to what's next and to whatever other stories you have for us!

Don't add, Don't take away, Don't stop being you (a "Top 10" writer)

Looking forward to more.

Thanks for sharing.

loved every word....

You could stop their story right here and it would be perfect. They are so awesome together! Thanks for presenting a "conventional" love story with unconventional characters. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

If you keep going with the characters it would be great to see them, like, 10-15 years later.

I am sooooo in love with this story. You have an amazing gift for writing and I would be beyond ecstatic if you were to continue this story, you can't even imagine how happy I was when I learned this chapter was posted. Please do continue on with this tale and if you don't please and I beg you do not hesistate to begin another!!!!!

Hot damn! This story was so, so good. I had my top favorite stories, you just knocked a lot of them way, way down the list. Original,well put together and so sexy. I'm looking forward to more of your writing and other story lines. Please, please continue!!! This was just amazing.

Please get rid of the prostrates and make them prostates :)

Read all three chapters tonight and loved them. You made me see Damien and Eli as though I knew them. Please write another story soon.

It was really good and unique :)

I agree with one of the previous comments; I felt as though I knew these characters and yet at the same time, getting to know them and watching them grow with each other. Is this really the end for these two? I know that Damien has a job and a small place to stay and has asked his new boy to move in, but what about Elijah? I don't know for certain why, but I feel as though if Elijah were to go off to college, Damien might have some problems dealing with that? Just bouncing thoughts.

Anyway, a solid job on the characterization, though it would be nice to see more of Damien's past. However, I did get a good feel for their personalities.

bloody good read ... well done

This is the best story Ive ever read on here! I loved it!!!!!! Keep up the good work!(:

I loved this story. Please keep writing. I look forward to reading more of your stories!!!

I love your characters...especially Damien and his friends, and Elijah, of course. It shows how stereotypes are usually wrong. When you can be yourself with the one you love, then you're with the right person.

I hope you have a chance to write more...your stories are well-written.

Oh wow, that was some damn hot sex you described there! Love the setting and the characters, it was about time someone added a punk story here - there's nothing hotter than two of those going at it ;)

This has to be one of the best stories i have read on here. It is not only hot, but you set up the characters so we get to know them and want to read more about them and the steamy sex they are having. Well done!!

bloody great story of the highest level.? well done

I stayed 'till 6 in the morning to read all 3 chapters. Unlike other erotic stories I've read, this really got under my skin. Even after I finished reading, the whole plot keeps haunting me, it simply blew me off my feet. The characters were perfectly built, although I would've enjoyed one more Damien's perspective in the end.

I could read it all over again, but I know I wouldn't get the same feeling as when I first went to through it. Another chapter would make a lot of readers happy, but I can see it's not happening..unfortunately.

This is the best story I've read so far, you did a magnificent job :)

(I'm sorry for posible mistakes, I'm not a native english speaker)

Simply outstanding! Loved it so much.

i enjoyed that

Well done.

The second time around. Just goes to show why you should never judge people by how they look.

Is it messed up that I'm a female and this got me off time and time again..

This feels more like a cliffhanger to a sequel in my opinion. I absolutely loved this story. I hope you continue it =^-^=

In female too but this was the hottest thing I've ever read. Loved the tattoo and punk side to it. Please write more!!

I stumbled across this story in a random search and I was a bit curious, but also skeptical. I've read stories where people try to write about the scene, but they don't actually know the scene, and it's a let-down. This was pleasantly (and sometimes not so pleasantly) accurate. Either you're in the scene, or you did your homework, but either way, thank you! I love reading subculture stories like this, they're not so common. Like gay kids don't happen with the punks and the skins and the rude kids.

Good story, all in all! Write some more scene stories! :D

I find this series incredible for multiple reasons. It will go along with how I feel about Exhibitionist Punk. Fantastic all around !

The descriptions for visuals, emotions, feelings, ideas for both stories; all fantastic. I was looking forward to a romantic relationship between the two characters in Exhibitionist Punk, so I'm more than happy to have that romanticism in this story. Besides that and the eroticism of the alternative scene, there's some life lessons in this story, which someone else commented on. Amazing work ~

This was my second read of this piece of work. I found it even hotter than the first time i read it. Honestly, i wish you would write more, just love it. You show great depth in your characters and a cool understanding of the scene. Tight!

I am female and I often enjoy the gay male section more then the rest, so no there is nothing wrong with you anon. The story is hellishly smokin hot.

I really enjoyed this. The story was solid, the characters had real depth and the feelings between Elijah and Damien grew believably. There wasn't a light switch moment where things suddenly were perfect, they changed and progressed until they were in love, with some hot sex along the way... This was a very satisfying story with some fantastic sex. Great job.

I really love this story, i love that they are aren't stereotypical characters

Awww! I loved everything about this story!!!

I wish u could've told us more about why Pete treated Elijah like trash and make him think that he loved him when all in all he was just using him all along but it's still a good story I hope u write ur next story about Pete and what his just desserts are gonna be and if he finds love with a man and when that man treats him just like he treated Elijah and if he ever does find true love and happiness in the end and If he ever truly apologizes to Elijah and Damien and if he finds true love and happiness will he get a H.E.A just like Elijah and Damien did. I love this story I hope u keep writing more gay male stories I love them

I read romantic literotica stories frequently. There were a few spelling boo-boo's but I knew what you meant and it was so good I didn't care. When I read a good/great story it never does. I love that it was common folk, that no sudden wealth appeared out of nowhere. I also love a great rescue scene that brings the lovers together. The images were vivid in my mind and I got teary here and there, I fell in love with Damien as well (blushing). I loved the intense, hard working/blue collar element. In the begging you want to believe that Damien is the asshole, but it turned out that Pete was the grade A asshole! I didn't see that coming. I'm a youthful 59 but this story brought out the 20 year old in me...I really haven't changed that much in my attitude toward love.... Bravo and I hope to see more added to this collection. ~Best

I totally agree with yourboy57! Everything about this story is wonderful! It was actually believable! I have read sooo many stories on this site, and don't get me wrong I love a lot of em. But some of them are just so unbelievable. I'm all about a HEA but I would love the whole story to be believable. And you achieved that. Not only was the story amazing well thought out and well written, but you fell for the main charectures. You felt it when Elijah got beat up. It was amazing!! I really hope to see more stories with these two, or a whole new series! And thank you, thank you, thank you for actually writing some decent length stories!!

I really enjoyed reading your story. Once I started I couldn't stop. Really didn't want it to end :-)

I'd love for this to be made into a full book!

I really enjoyed that.

Found this story on a cold February morning in 2022, almost 10 years after this talented Author posted it. I couldn’t put it down. Five Stars every chapter. Every chapter added to my Favorites. Bravo!

The story soo good i forgot to rate 🤭