All Comments on 'Wrong Woman?'

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MasterErebusMasterErebusover 7 years ago
Well-crafted and sexy as hell

The setup for mistaken identity is impressive without dragging on too long, and I liked seeing the action from both their points of view in turn. Great detail, great payoff, hot as fuck. Keep them coming, please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Yes

I agree with Master. They are so hot I want more. I love daddy stories when they end in babies.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I got an awsome idea for a possible sequal

The girls boyfriend was the one texting her. He came back to see her fucking her dad.

From here he blackmails the two, and drives them closer together at the same time he winds up hooking up with the mom

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Anoth3r Brillant work,but can you continue the stormy camping trip series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Sequel.

No blackmail bullshit though. I never read those.

British_TaxiBritish_Taxiabout 7 years ago
Very hot! Please continue the story!

I agree with MasterErebus and the others. This is a very erotic story.

It was well-written and believable, and I am especially impressed with how much you were able to do on a single page without making it feel rushed.

Please do continue this when you are able! It's a new favorite of mine. :D

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Hot as fuck

Gosh the story was so hot like I wanna get rid of this virginity right now.

British_TaxiBritish_Taxialmost 7 years ago
I loved this story

I loved it! Please do a sequel!

1say161say16over 6 years ago
Part 2

Needs a second chapter

Omart57Omart57about 6 years ago
Loved it-

even ,More this time through. Wish I had given it Five stars the first time. Lol.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Yeah!

Excellent tale…

Slut4daddie36DSlut4daddie36Dalmost 5 years ago
Oh my god yes!

Excellent! Fuck Im so wet! Love your style! Please more more more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Should've

Really great !!!! But instead of Mark ripping Chrissy's blind fold off Mom should've walked in just Mark filled Chrissy's tank then after everyone being shocked at it they decide to pretend it never happened. But they can't stop thinking about it, do it again, have a threesome, and Chrissy is pregnant. Or something like that.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Writing "for the last time ever" kinda ruined the fantasy. Also it was a bit too rushed would have enjoyed a slower more teasing buildup.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Sooooo he was too stupid to notice the woman didn't look like his wife before he pounds into her? He'll I have identical twin cousins that have different hair styles and perfumes as well as other things but this moron can't tell if his wife or daughter is right next to him.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Just love a good case of mistaken identity.

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