All Comments on 'WVC Ch. 05: Application Ceremony'

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ValensGirlValensGirlalmost 10 years ago

Hot, hot, hot. I loved the repeated descriptions of his erection, and how the women felt him up in so many different and varied ways. It was very easy to imagine being one of those women touching him all over--yum--plus it was cool to see his inner monologue.

Off to see what else this author has written!

arrowglassarrowglassalmost 10 years ago
Such incredible descriptive almost sex!

I can just imagine a finger in my ass, hands on my cock the way you describe and nipples being used...all those touches...especially the erotic sting of repeated spanking...what a total turn on!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
A marvellous story!

Please keep it coming - five stars!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Very well written, more please!

Seasider16Seasider16almost 10 years ago
Hooked

This is a great story I am hooked on it and can`t wait to see what happens next as it could go in numerous directions. You are keeping us all on tender hooks waiting for the next installment and the story could go on for a very long time.

Well written definately one of my favourites

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Exellent

This is exellent stuff do keep it coming, and maybe cumming too! Cant wait for the next installment.

gupiaogupiaoalmost 10 years agoAuthor
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maddictmaddictover 8 years ago
Not for a minute.

Mistress I must cum, help me.....

Bill let er rip.

RegretsRegretsabout 7 years ago
I'm still reading-very likely to stay to the end

Great,all the attention his dick is getting. This is the sort of attention we give to women but don't always get this level of attention coming our way-I find

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Vivid description of "ruined orgasms" I wonder what other experiences Bill will have, and how the Club will use him.

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