All Comments on 'WVC Ch. 07: Int. Drawing Class #1'

It's moving at a snail's pace! Lengthen the chapters.

For a guy with a giant cock (in a college full of women) he does not get much fucking pussy at all.

I agree it that the pace needs to quicken and that the chapters should be longer with a bit more sex. Other wise good job.

I agree more would be nicer, but let's not be too greedy people! I feel mentioning how horny and frustrated he is, and how long its been since his last release would make ita bit more exciting to the reader. Nut overall I still gave 5 stars. Thanks again!

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and I'm thoroughly enjoying this series

If you've not read them on my Profile page, you might want to take a look

We are 7 chapters in yet every 1 has been a copy of the first chapter. Wouldn't now be a good time to move the story along into some more interesting areas as things have got alittle tedious.

Also why has our small brained hero never asked what's in it for him? It's obvious that these freaky women want him bad for whatever reasons and yet this young, good looking, athletically built, well hung guy hasn't once asked any meaningful questions as to what he will get out of participating in the club. If it's the occasional handjob then what's the point in taking part?

He is 1 of only 20 men in an otherwise all female school and with his looks and big dick could easily bang a different girl each week and yet he is wasting time searching for scraps.

I hope you don't take my comments as me being some kind of troll taking cheap shots at you because I do like your style of writing and plot is an interesting 1 I just fear that as you say in your profile that you've been writing this for a couple of years I don't want to be reading this for another 20 or 30 chapters hoping that something will happen soon.

Story seems to have come to a halt.

BTW, I agree with the anonymous poster who asked "What's in it for the guy?"

I've read your notes after recently discovering this great tale. Your best quote in my opinion is along the lines "don't let my fantasy spoil your reality". It's just a story people. Stop trying to find flaws. It's an excellent and original story. As to the "what's in it for thr guy?" comment, what submissive lover of beautiful women with a tease mdenial fetish wouldn't dream to be in this very spot?!! Well written, truly artwork in my mind. Thanks, hope to see more!

Really nicely done. I like the way you're drawing this out (no pun intended). Can't wait to see where you take it from here.

and it seems like everyone is excited. Great writing, lovin this story.

Repetitive, unimaginative, female adolescent masturbation material.

It's been boring for a couple of chapters now, no relief in sight (pun intended), so it's become way too silly for me to continue. Not sure exactly how big a loser this guy is to tolerate all this crap, but he must be one of top 10 losers in the world.

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Why would he, or any other man, do something like this? Maybe this is hot shit for cows too unattractive to find their own naked man, but I can't see it doing anything for mentally healthy people. What's the point??? 2 stars and goodbye.

This story continues to get hotter and hotter.

I am waithing for my email invitation to thw White Vampres Club!!!!