All Comments on 'WVC Ch. 08: The Velvet Fist'

These are intoxicating!

And then he decides to "notice" women? This story couldn't be any dumber if you TRIED to make it ridiculous.

I don't think the storyline is dumb, this is a whole new experience for Bill so he doesn't know what to do and (more important) what he wants.

I really like the story although I usually don't like exhibitionism and am not submissive.

Waititng for the 9th Chapter,

Phil

I really liked this chapter! It had an interesting story line. Hopefully Robyn will make another appearance in up coming chapters.

I guess if you write a comment that is not positive that it gets deleted? Has commented before the story is hard to believe. Who would go jump thru all the rings if you or not getting anything out of it buy blue balls.It has been 8 chapters and no sex. Get real....

what more can I say?

Why do trolls read these stories then leave negative comments? I love you writing. Keep up the great work!

j

of my profile for the ETA of the next chapter.

I am really enjoying this series. I hope to read more soon!

#1 You don't tell other women aboit your secret club. Like fight club.

Bill I'm with you bro I hope this isn't for nothing either, humping air isn't going to cut it.

I see now that's he's not going to be stud-maybe a virgin forever. How do they tjink he goes to bed on his own yet obeys a simple spoken order to leave well alone? This guy needs a cage.