All Comments on 'WVC Ch. 16: The Blue Goose'

Another sensual chapter of ongoing exquisite torture...the taste of temptation...the touch of sublime pleasure...what's next?

You should have ended it several chapters ago. Nothing clever, erotic or interesting in this mess. No stars.

Lol I disagree with the other anon....this is superbly fantastic, literally being put through training, each scenario is training a different aspect and breaking his taboos. I love it, the voyuerism and denial are honestly fantasies of mine that I would love to do...or be forced to do. Keep it coming, the pace is fantastic.

Ignore the negative anon. This is my favorite story on here, taking its time but never letting off ;)

I would have exploded and told them where to stick their club long ago.

Lovely story but I would love to see just one act of defiance from him ...just one.

We need to hear something new. You have got Bill going thru the same crap all around town . Chapter after chapter of the same thing just different place.

I really like the story, but it is getting a little repetitive, all the - he must wait, not today, maybe tomorrow, only if your good, we'll tell you when and not before etc. For goodness sake let him cum a bit more. There are any number of pretty girls round, so it's not as though he's spoilt for choice. But that said, more chapters, please !