All Comments on 'WVC Ch. 31: The Library Streak'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Finally your back! It seems like forever since we had an update to the story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Another hit

:-) you are so good at this!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

This story's getting way too dragged out-I think having another scenario before the so called final training will just lose more interest than it could gain. Also, this chapter's much more far fetched than the past ones. I really don't think this chapter was really necessary. It's really just spinning its wheels at this point.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Agreed

This story is getting way too long. Training #4 and the chapters after that in particular seemed to go nowhere. The story really was interesting in the first chapters, but it is now just stalling for time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
What did Erika promise you ? .......

Erika did not ask him .

Erika did not tell him .

Erika did not consult him .

Erika promised him to all and sundry .

Is Erika a pimp ?

Is he a whore ?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
End or continue

Please end this story or continue it. I keep looking for new stories in this thread and am always disappointed. I would like to see Bill as a full member of the sorority and be on the vetting committee. Go from there.

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