All Comments on 'WVC Ch. 01: Intro & Interview'

A very powerful submission ,well written and intriguing .;Looking forward to the next chapter with great anticipation .

The story starts off badly using the wrong spelling early, IT'S 'VAMPIRE' no 'Y' in the word read a dictionary. So get a new editor as this one failed.

This was a really good opening chapter. Looking forward to the continuation of this story!

First I want to address the idiot anonymos commenter. Vampyre is a correct spelling, guess some people don't read much literature. Now back to the author, so far I am intrigued and looking forward to see where the story goes.

claims there are no words spelled 'Vampyre' in the dictionary -

Urban Dictionary: Vampyre

www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=Vampyre

Thought by many (Morons) to be a 'cooler' way of spelling Vampire, this is not the case a 'Vampyre' is actually a mortal Vampire.

Anyway, who cares?

Ever heard of 'poetic license'?

Basically, when writing a fictional story there is some freedom to make up your own words, especially Names!

Loved it. Nicely done.

Thank you. A really promising beginning. Lots of potential combinations, a gentle virgin hunk, nothing too aggressive to begin with but very promising femdom, exhibition, CFNM in prospect.

Nice beginning. This could go in many directions and can't wait to see where you take it.

about the spelling of Vampyre? It's a CLUB and as such can spell it however the members see fit. Maybe it's just a good way to indicate the difference between bloodsuckers and genitalsuckers. Frankly, I like the spelling, it's more exotic in appearance.

Please bring us Chapter 2 soon - this was really good. As to spellings, well, it's your story, so you can call it what you like! Vampire, Vampyre, stick it up your Jampire ... as the old doggerel has it ;) !

This seems like a really great story, please continue!!

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as he is to see where this will lead.

Silly me. I thought that Vampyres were Vampires that lunch at the Y diner.

Like it so far.

I do love this. I loved all kinds of things about it-the not being able to touch and the formality in manners and the expectation that orders will be obeyed ( and the obeying).... The story has many dimensions. I do hope that some of the members are not "lookers"... we could do with more ordinary woman in these stories, even some who would say that they are, themselves, very plain. The authority over men guilds a woman and endows them with confidence, and this makes such women much easier to relate to-you know where you are with them.

Obviously, I must return.

Sort of exciting so far...

The authority over men guilds a woman and endows them with confidence, and this makes such women much

I do not know why I came up with that on the day. I knew the difference even as a boy.

read the whole series 3 time in the past month

Omg I fell in love 💖

So hot in am throbbing

great, eagerly anticipating the next installment!

While this serious is well written I for one am disappointed that I wasted my time reading it. Bill never learns. Doesn't pay attention. Doesn't even have a journal to keep track of who he meets, and what they look like. Submissive pussi is what Bill really is. No balls and has no idea how to use what he has.

What a pathetic little wimp he is. Silly nonsense.