All Comments on 'X-C Stories: The Curse Pt. 01'

This feels a bit more rushed than some of your other stories. It kind of jumped right into the sex with little build up to it. Would of loved to see some conversations with Sal and Daisy instead of just skimming it. They also seemed to jump pretty quickly to the idea that it was the dad that did it. Daisy was pretty set and eager on the idea that it was her Dad which seemed off. That may play into the story later so its not to much of a problem. Still felt like this was way more rushed than your other stories, which is a shame since so many had good start ups but it feels like they are just getting dropped. Hopefully the next one will have more of a build up to things.