by notbreckenridge
Great read , different from most stories I have read and a welcome change of pace .
I like the Xchange concept, it leads to some really interesting short stories. This story needs a sequel in which this comes into play: "He does a demonstration, and as a sweetener to the deal he fucks some of them." Tommy either becomes a demonstrator... or he gets a job working for one of the clients. Or maybe he gets a job as a waiter at a hotel and sees his dad demonstrating the product.
You had me going at the beginning before I realized who Bethany really was.
You juggled a lot of sub plots into one very good story. I was a bit disappointed in the lack of oral sex, but it is what it is.