All Comments on 'X-Change: Homecoming'

by notbreckenridge

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Super story , quite a bit different from any I have read !!!

Great read , different from most stories I have read and a welcome change of pace .

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomealmost 6 years ago
Good Story

I like the Xchange concept, it leads to some really interesting short stories. This story needs a sequel in which this comes into play: "He does a demonstration, and as a sweetener to the deal he fucks some of them." Tommy either becomes a demonstrator... or he gets a job working for one of the clients. Or maybe he gets a job as a waiter at a hotel and sees his dad demonstrating the product.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
tommy next

tommy uses x change

SmittyNZSmittyNZover 3 years ago
Strong but brutal story

Now onto part 2!

Patricia169Patricia169over 1 year ago

ik wil erg graag ook zulke pil !

ColonelinguistColonelinguistover 1 year ago

You had me going at the beginning before I realized who Bethany really was.

You juggled a lot of sub plots into one very good story. I was a bit disappointed in the lack of oral sex, but it is what it is.

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