All Comments on 'X-men: Bast Ch. 02'
by Crouching_Buddha
- 8 Comments
Anonymousabout 17 years agoAs much as I enjoy anything to do with X-men, you've a terrible way with hero worshiping characters. It's probably hard not to do it, considering they're not your characters and you'll be appealing to fans.. but it's annoying. Most people who read this know a little about the X-men characters and the long descriptions aren't really needed, details can come with events and should flow. Anyways, I sound way too critical when there's a lot of great stuff about your writing too. You do write good .. it's just an issue with the characters :P Like Logan's speech.. wow.
2052Dreamsover 16 years agoI'm impressed with the content and depth of details. And, from a Logan fan, I'm amazed at the speech you have down for him. I like learning more about the characters since I'm only a fan of the movies. Your writing in tight, packed, and accurate, so keep up the good work.
LokiKarameikosabout 15 years agoChapter 2 seems just as good as chapter 1 was, and it started out in a way that you wouldf not have imagined.
Keep up the good work.
Anonymousover 8 years agoSeems she can easily stop a heart without breaking a sweat. She should be able to kill with what you handed her.
