All Comments on 'X-men: Bast Ch. 05'

Loving this story so far... it's developing quite nicely.

I agree whole heartedly with you on the issue of cyclops.

In the words of terrance and phillip 'scotts a dick'.

It might be good however to treat his (i assume soon to be occuring) death with reverence... and not just coldly cast him off. You don't like him, I don't like him, but i'm sure the x-men as a whole do.

Good plot, very erotic, good work.

I enjoy your stories.. but I believe it was Stephen King who once said, and was completely correct, that accents very rarely transfer well to paper. He never said how to correct it, but I find you're making Rogue and Logan seem more dim than hindered by an accent. It's especially not needed in characters who have reader's with more of a background on them.. maybe that's just my opinion, but you could definitely tone it down and I'm willing to bet people would still hear an accent in their head during conversations..... Other than that, excellent work and very interesting read

I've already commented on how much I'm enjoying these stories and I just wanted to say I fully agree with your dislike of Scott, the mans an unholy tool. I was also wondering where Kia's codename came from?

I liked this one just as good as I liked the last one. And yes, Scott Summeers is an ass.

And don't worry, nobody likes cyclops :P