All Comments on 'X: Xanadu'

very romantic and beautiful in its simplicity.

Love to read stories of the otehr 25 rooms *W*

one or two grammatical errors, but not enough to be distracting.

Have you ever read the original poem, "Kubla Khan" by Samuel Taylor Coleridge? It's too long to post as a comment, but it's a literary classic and an easy internet search. Maybe it will inspire you.

You're really talented. You really know how to set up the atmosphere.