All Comments on 'Xanthopella: The Gift'

Excellent story.

I only intended to read a paragraph or two but once I started I couldn't stop. Had to stay with it to the end.

I would like to see more stories with this type of fantasy.

Perhaps some of them with a male main character.

This story is by far the best that I've read on this site. I would love to read more by "peterpan".

This story was truly amazing!

Wonderful! No need to say anything else

This is one of the best erotic stories I've ever read! Thank you very much!Please write more of them....

Wow,not just erotic but that was a good story . I really liked the alien human culture but,also that the non humans acted with their own agenda that really had no bearing on the humans .Yes , that the non humans did not act human .

This is still and will ever be my fav. non-human story.

You make the aliens act alien, see to it that this human -- non-human culture is actually acknowledged and write a convincing story.

The thief never simply leaves her thiefery and lives happily ever after without a thought to her past. She wants to return to her father, which is her primary objective from the start (even if she does not like him).

Non of this "she fucked me once and I will forever stay with her" stuff.

I just love it ^^

Her mistress too is beliveable and got a nice story, without distracting from the erotic of the story itself.

Please keep this up!