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baikalisanbaikalisanover 7 years ago

More backgrond and flesh it out some please

HatracksHatracksabout 7 years ago
Nice story

Nice story. Kind of sweet. I like that it's short. Leaves it to the imagination what comes next.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Nice. Very Invader-Zim-esque

I like it. It feels a lot like if someone got an invader zim fanfic and changed the character names.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Love the alien anatomy

Very reminiscent of tentabuldges and nooks from Homestuck fanfiction, loooooove that tentadick.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Too short

Some background about how they met would help sell the sex. By the way! How old is this odd couple supposed to be?

The description of events, people and places are too vague.

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I'm just a lady that's only kinda sexy. I'm into men that respect and are kind to women. I also write erotica sometimes... usually ones that heavily involve cute boys. Hope you enjoy my stories!