All Comments on 'Xenophobe'

I agree with your "Authors Note" yes to all the above but a great read anyway thanks for writing -------may your "super sparkly day" last for decades

Dude, that was great writing there. It was unique, different and very entertaining. You don't need the stupid disclaimers at the start and end. People are going to say what they're going to say, so don't bother trying to pre-empt them. At least you had the balls to write something in a very different style, and as it turns out, very successfully at that. I for one, enjoyed this tale immensely. Thank you.

Thanks for sharing.

You sir, have talent. I hope you bring the Theriots back for visits

Sweet, silly, stupid... I loved everything about your story. And don't get an editor; the minor typos and misspellings and the chaotic pace and missing transitions just add to the charm of this story.

I really enjoyed your story. Please keep writin more. 5 stars.

Even if it DOES come off the bayou.

This was like a breath of fresh air . Yes it had silly & stupid moments but living next door to the Bayou state it was refreshing .

I think trite_reader put in better words than I am able . 5******'s I hope you keep the story going as I really really liked it.

Thanks again

TX CRACKER

This was a true breath of fresh air. I enjoyed it very much.

writing in dialect can't be easy, but you carried it off with panache. I can imagine it gave automatic spell checking fits.

I don't think Buford has any idea what he has gotten himself into. It is too bad the sisters can't continue to fill custom furniture orders keeping the craft alive, even passing it on to Alton's son.

It would have been more romantic if Buford would have been more attracted to Eunice's strength & Norma's innocence rather than their bodies. IMO.

I simply fell in love with the Cajun dialect.

Its really fascinating to know how English is 'localised' throughout the world.

Thanks.

i grew up in east Texas that there is down home talk i grew up with

Justa good read. Love the coonass dialect. 5 Stars!

while i tried to read your work, the dialect made the story all but unreadable to me. I wish you best of luck in your future endeavors

Thank you for another great one!

Please, pretty please, could you write something about Metairie Lawn?

Thank you

Really enjoyed this story. I liked the build-up and fleshing out of the characters. The sex was just a good "part" of the story to add color. Well done

It's still great.

Dark and sexy

This man is a truly great storyteller!

The plot line notwithstanding, this was one of the most enjoyable reads I've ever encountered on this site yeah. What made is so great was the way you were able to couch the story in the vernacular of the Cajun culture. Please more of the same . Just try to remember the rule that there is no 'th' in the language . . . .

This was a great story. I'm surprised it doesn't have a higher score. The dialogue was very pleasant to read with the Cajun dialect and really made the story and characters. First story I've read of yours, but I will definitely be reading more. 5/5