All Comments on 'Y is for Yvette'

thanx for a nice story again ... please dont stop this here ... hope you will write this story some more episode ........

Very nice story.

You write very well.. nicely romantic... more please..

Really liked this story, lovely characterisation, a very tender and touching love story.

There's a slight problem with the timelines though. On page one you're five months into a six month contract and then on page two Steve and co. were very supportive over twelve months through your wife's fatal illness (and presumably in the several months since). In fact the mention of widowhood seems a bit of a non sequitur.

Genuinely a small quibble. I'l be going on to read the rest of your stories with eager anticipation.

Dave

really nice little tale, a small quibble to add; As a crossdresser, George/Yvette would have done most the hair clean up way before the night of the visit to Steve. BTW to any wanna bees, waxing is a much better option to shaving and does not cost that much, a much better option if shyness is an issue is to get a good quality epilator. Now had he been a newbe to the lifestyle shaving would have been acceptable.