by Jakey
hey! that was quite refreshing, nice slant, even better if it's true(for you), like the use of laugage.
Great story. If I were just a tad more romantic t would be a 5 - as it is it's still among the top 50 anal stories as far as I'm concerned.
This is the first ever "Editors Choice" I actually liked. I have a thing for computer geeks maybe. Who knew you guys had it in you. I really enjoyed your use of language and the easy to read conversational style. I didn't give it 100 only because I felt the anal sex was "T-M-I". Keep on keeping on loved it!
nice build-up.good flow.the techie details,though,could be curtailed.otherwise a nice read.
i loved your sexy descriptions along with your commentary...well, done.