All Comments on 'Yardwork'

Very good, and very hot! The one thing that stops me from giving you the 100 is that your sentences seems to be very short and static, which could be very jarring. Maybe if you combined several phrases and sentences, it'll flow better. But otherwise, wow.

very clear visuals, very hot, well done. enjoyed it very much, i will be reading more of your work. thank you!

Very hot