All Comments on 'Yearning Hearts Ch. 02'

I was on the verge of tears reading this. Simply beautiful, don't stop pls

It cant end like this they need and love eachother

Don't fret there's definitely more coming. Also I'm so sorry if the prior two chapters seemed a bit confusing. No more one page chapters, promise.Lol

Your writing is just something else.....thanks

Please let them be together. Surely his wife is noticing something.

Just a quick suggestion, there are some sentences where a couple of commas would be useful, just to break the paragraph up a bit. When it's read out loud, you can't get a breath.

BORING

DICK.

Jonathan is a selfish prick who only thinks of his own pleasure. He only wants to get off and doesn't care much about Tom's wants. Oh yeah he gives him a bit of a suck now and then but that is not enough. I know Tom's marriage is a sham and it should end , but he is too good for Jonathan.