All Comments on 'Yearning Hearts Ch. 04'

Omg im in tears at yhis thomas needs to realise what he is doing to ethan and go after him it cant end like this

Holly crap. I can't take much more of this. I'm a physical wreck from reading this chapter. What fantastic writing to be able to pull the reader into a story with such force. Amazing!!!

Damn i didn't want it to end......it's was soo gud. .....thank you for your beautiful writing.....pls keep it coming....

It's Thomas and Marian

I won't say anything about this chapter cause I don't wanna give anything away about chapter five but I will say that all your comments are received and appreciated. I literally can't stop smiling, thanks guys.

give an update, I just reread this chapter and the waiting for chapter 5 is pure agony. please give an update soon!

FUCKING STUPID STORY

Marian is the bitch and Jonathan is close second! Though it pisses me off why Thomas lets that b*tch get way with screwing his best friend! I don't want them together AT ALL.

Thomas is a really nasty little parasitic drama queen. Jonathan can do sooooo much better at any gay bar, resort, or just about anywhere. Thomas doesn't seem to bring anything to the relationship but good looks. Good looks are easy to replace with other good looks.

Hope J cuts Thomas loose and gets on with his life and finds someone worth his time, energy and devotion.

Re: Thomas .. . Vindictive twinks are a dime a dozen