All Comments on 'Yes! Please Yes!'

I loved this! Can't wait to be used like that!

This is a good story premise, however you need to work on grammer, punctuation, and word choice.

I really liked it otherwise.

Yeah, you chose the wrong words, your grammar was all over the place, you started some of your sentences with capital letters (who does that?), finished them with full stops and threw in a few commas, and don't let me start on your paragraph positioning... On the positive side, it was brilliant, made me hot and I gave it 5 stars. Up yours William Shakespeare.

Really well written, who acres about grammar--its just fantasy! Well written fantasy!

That was really, REALLY fucking hot!

Five stars!

really why could he have not used any lube atleast in her fitst time

anal is awsome but needs lube

but this was brutality how come she is still alive

this was harsh no anal play no anal dilation no lube why ?