by SerenVale
Hot little read, but it almost becomes one of those drinking games-take a shot every time they say 'whore.'
"He made me feel like his queen even when he treated me like his whore." That was a perfect line. For me, it explains that delicate balance of dominance and submission perfectly.
this is getting hotter by the chapter and can't wait for the next one
Lovely story but definitely needs a bit of light editing to polish this gem up. Comma splices "my, dear" are awkward.
More please! I need more from you - amazing effect on me. Right now I need to cum! Please let me cum! Another chapter,please!
Ready to beg you more!