All Comments on 'Yes, Virginia Ch. 04'

Not the ending I was expecting, but you made it work. Really, this is what really good writing is supposed to be like.

5 stars.

Great story, hope to read more from you soon

I have enjoyed this story enormously and I hope you will be bringing us Chapter One of a new one very soon. Thank you for your fine and delicate work - five stars.

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"She wanted someone to probe into and violate her body. Fun as that is, I needed to get into her mind as well."

And this story gets right into the mind, lays bare the motives, the impulses, the things that drive, the reasons why. Dark and very, very satisfying.

I was drawn in by you and was instantly obsessed with you! Scary but true. Good chapters.. Please write more about D/s relationships....your good at it and the Lesbian aspect was such a plus because its usually all about the guys and gals.

Keep on a writing!

There's absolutely nothing wrong with this story, and I have to say that even though Dom/sub isn't my main cup of tea, I enjoyed it thoroughly!

Extraordinary. One of the best I have ever read. Thank you for sharing this with us.