by TomOne
A delicate, erotic look at role reversal with none of the usual degrading aspects! Two lovers giving and receiving intimate pleasure. Thank-you!
What a nice story. My girlfriend like to fuck me with her strap-on.
Thanks to share this story with us.
Not my cup of tea, but I eally like it, and could put myself into the story. She should have made us guys eat her out after the fuck! that would have made the story complete.
Tom, that was truely amazing, as i was reading I became lost in my sense of sexuality, and for a moment I felt as if I were no longer reading the story, but that I was actually there. Thank you, please write more. Stories like that reassure me of how natural it can be for two lovers to share themselves in even the most taboo of ways.
opnmindd2003@yahoo.com
I like this one your writing paints a sensual Picture in my mind. I can almost smell the heat.
Not surprised at how well written the story is having seen some of your "unpublished" work on the threads! All I can say is it's about time you shared your talents with others-looking forward to seeing more :)
This is awesome, Tom, I'm so glad you submitted it!
I hope there's more to come, sex and humor is a delicious combination!
The story was written extremely well. It sounds like an occurance that took place in actual life. I truly enjoyed it because it demonstrated true life for many people. It also demonstrated how many people do interface with their loved ones. Thank you for writing such a fine demonstration of a true sex story.
Been there done that... luved the story so much...My wife pleasures me often, & it's the wildest ride ever...luved your beautifully descriptive words... Superb writing..
Too many long words. Don't be afriad to use things things like 'mouth' and 'ass'.
Quite a good story, not one of the best but i still enjoyed it. I have to agree with one of the comments though, I had to skip a few bits because I felt it dragged in places. Overall pretty good though, sounds a hell of an experience!
Joanna
Erotically charged but, a tad shorter than one would hope!
Great read though - More but, a little nastier could make it naughtier <eg>