All Comments on 'You Are Loved Ch. 03'

more please!

I am so into this story. I really like the back and forth between the characters. However, if you could use asterisks or something to better clarify when your are making the change from one character, that would be less confusing. something like this ~~~~~~~~************ALEX***********~~~~~~~~

it's great as a story but shouldnt it be more erotic?

I could really connect with both Ricky and Hans in Part 3. They are almost my true brothers. Well not my true ones, they were shot many years ago. I love vampires and this story shows another side of them and its pretty amazing. I'm also very much into doing things with ice cubes, so I will definatly try and use your ideas wink wink. Keep writing. It almost seems as if you're writing about yourself. Sigh...

its amazing and im still patiently waiting for the storie to continue i really wish for it to be soon every time i read i am just as enthralled as the last ... sigh . pleas hurry to write some more its an amazing storie really i cant wait to read what will happen i really can not . thank you for your writting . its wonderfull and pleas keep up the good work .

keisha Toriko

I live your stories... I seriously can't wait for more... You put twilight to shame!

The pace at the beginning was rushed and disjointed but it started smoothing out. Good work!