All Comments on 'You Are My Home Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

At last, a story with believable characters,not just sex-hungry creatures looking for the quickie fuck. Please continue with the story and keep the sex as interesting.

edsachryedsachryalmost 10 years agoAuthor
Believable Characters

Thanks for the comment. I have worked at making the characters more humanly real and believable. I have tried to make the realness of the characters based upon their past experiences and relationships. These are the things that shape most of us, and make us who we are and in many ways dictate what we do. Michael and Diane are no different.

arrowglassarrowglassover 9 years ago
great story....!

Like the touch...taste...feel of this story...and looking forward to reading on!

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