by edsachry
I am very much enjoying the progress of your enthralling story.
Please continue.
Thankyou
I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
Thank you for sharing
Please carry on with this story, it's wonderful and I'm enjoying every moment of it!!!
Please continue can't seem to get enough of them. The waiting is agonizing. But Love it. 5 stars
I am enjoying the story very much and can't wait for the next chapter
Thanks for writing it.
Thanks all for the encouragement and comments. Chap. 05 is waiting for approval, and I have just about finished Chap. 06, which if you've been following the saga, will throw you for a loop. I also have plans for Chapters 07 & 08.
Thanks again.
ed
After I Located Chap. 1 and started from the beginning, I was delighted in the story line, the interaction between the characters merging so efficiently. There was absolutely no difficulty in following the story. The writing was done extremely well, few typos and even fewer grammatical flaws. It reminded me of an English term paper that I had to write back in the 70's on an entirely different subject. My English professor rewarded me with an A+; much to my surprise. I'm sure that I'll have to add some more when I've completed this story.
I've enjoyed this story so far.. tho some of the chapters have been shorter. I'm curious bout wether this sharing its self may become regular thing
Or possibly lead to extended family..as in Christy/Sandy getting pregnant?
Great tale of a second love for both Michael and Diane along with a twist of two of her friends joining the fun. Well Done 5 stars