All Comments on 'You Asked For It'

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FA_JFFA_JFover 10 years ago

Fourteen hours is a long way from seven. It will take a chunk of magic to have him basically functional tomorrow, let alone to give him a day to drive the bus.

ValensGirlValensGirlover 10 years ago

Yay, I was hoping for more from you! :) I probably would have let him come, and then started all over the next day...but I gotta say I love your descriptions. Hotness.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
The next day

add sequel for next day

RKreaderRKreaderover 6 years ago
Power corrupts

and absolute power corrupts absolutely.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Amazing!

This is one of the hottest stories I've ever read. Please keep writing!

serve4herserve4heralmost 4 years ago
Fantasy Fun

What a hot story! Your world is rocking my world. Magic that can heal and control, energize and enrapture...please keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Double-edged sword

"And of course, it was hardly the women's fault that the men couldn't handle their own insane fantasies."

So what this basically says - if you fantasize about being raped and then can't handle it, it's your own fault.

Clearly the Sex Magic turned women into degenerated beasts unable of any coherent thinking or reflection on their own part. How ironic, for them to fight so hard for equality, only to find themselves at the very spot they wished to eradicate.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Was a hot story but glad women dont have that power if they did us men would be subject to a gynarchy.where women rule thank fuck they dont

AnonymousAnonymous12 days ago

Well, that was certainly stupid. What a waste.

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