All Comments on 'You Bet Your Ass!'

And very well-written. I look forward to more.

That was a great story! It was written very well. I dont usually leave coments but i so enjoyed this story! Keep up the good work cant wait for part 2?

I can already see my story in this category sliding down a notch on the top list to make room for this bit of sheer genius. It's tender, hot, funny, clever and has a lovely little plot twist.

And good god Darce, you've got some gorgeously descriptive turns of phrase in here: "the sound like honey over gravel", "maturity card revoked", "the taste of rum and cake fondant on his lips." They're just the ones I remember off the top of my head after a first read.

Damn you, Miss Sweet. You make me want to write better. Thanks for the inspiration. -PF

Good story, and as Paco noted, great turns of phrase. You wear down Margot's resistance believably and well. More would be fine, but my imagination can work on it, too. :)

i truly expected Nathan to be just the way Margot was seeing him, but little remarks along the way kept me wondering, just what sort of ending You would bring this to, and i must say it was Fantastic..

Thank you so much and i look forward to Your next chapter with this story, or just Your next story.

Love the writing, tension and this story!

thank you!

Probably the best put together story of its' kind- ever!

Well conceived, well written, well edited -- and, oh yeah, sexy as can be. What more could we ask for? Thanks.

I loved the story but I really think it is a romance.

Others might try…but you, seemingly effortlessly, have expertly driven this story, and brought it home to a perfect flawless finish. Well done!

this is a nice story. and yes, this should be a romance... :) more please. :)

Wow, you're a bitch.

I think we should levy woman to a certain whore muster, and in case they don't show up, I think we should attach their property.

I was waiting for Nathan to be some kind of nightmare and loved how he'd been looking after his uncle!

Great story.

I was ready for this to be a taking. But the buildup was great. A true seduction piece. Thank you.

... that's it and 5 stars. Hottest story ever.