by johngalt47
WIMPY THE HUBBY WATCHING WIFE FUCK AROUND.WHAT YOU WAITING FOR HER TOO GET GANGBANG SO YOU CAN EAT IT OUT.
she whoring and he worrying about what she think.there will never be any trust or respect between them.that two things that make a marriage work.why make this a good man a wimp.this woman is evil.
Hey you knuckle gragging moron, do you know how to use the letter s? Your grammar is purely pathetic. You criticize this author's story when you don't even have the intelligence to write/speak in plain english. Why should an author who has taken their time time and effort to write a piece of FICTION be criticized by a babbling grunting idiot like you? Crawl back to your cave, open up your big bag of ditchweed reefer and start reading little golden books. Apparently they are at the top of your reading comprehension.
... and such small portions!
They hate it so much yet they can't NOT read it. I don't care for the stories either, but I love the moronic feedback. You can tell it comes from loser guys who can't maintain a relationship with a woman. It's frigging fiction! Get a grip, besides the one you have on your crotches.
Just a comment from a fellow writer who has nothing but contempt for the VERY small minority of Literotica readers that give this mindless and worthless feedback.
I must say I am enjoying the story. Continue to write it and I will keep coming back.
Naughty Nae
This is a skillful stomach twister. Gotta check next installment.
It took merely a couple of paragraphs to lose all sympathy for the hubbie. Two wrongs making a right? So much for the moral high ground.
He dilly, dallies about his wife's affair and instead of acting like a man he plays the "pick-me" dance. On top of that he immediately has a revenge affair.
Throughout all of this he shows zero emotion, other than some anger.
This author just has no clue on what infidelity is and how to deal with it. The character is doing every single thing wrong!
He's doing exactly what it is she's doing. They're both cheaters, and it does not matter who went first.