by Ann Douglas
What is here is that this kind of thing does happen. Thanks for the strap on. You've got to get a woman to take you via an EnJoyUs. Oh....
so hot
so good
I would like more of Audrey and Rachel please .
Totally awesome! Hopefully they'll be best friends. Thanks for sharing. And Happy New Year 2018!!!
Now this was magnificent story!!!!!!!!!does it have end i hope not. Please!!!!!!!!
it was a good story, I only read up to page 2 then skipped to the end, I am not good with stories longer than 4 pages unless it grabs me and the start
Another great story. I agree that there should be more of these two lovely ladies.
Thanks for a great story. I quite like the direction it took, from the standard expected blackmail. Well done!
Once again Ann, your fertile mind has woven another beautiful, erotic love story. This could stand alone, or become the beginning of a series. I will let you decide which, because I know you are the only one who knows best.
I enjoy your stories but this is 10 out of 10 ,could this one have a part 2
But they cap it at five, so I'll just say thank you for another great story.
I don't even have to see your name as the author of a story, just start reading and it has to be you. I have no idea why you aren't a more mainstream writer. As a long time book and short story reader, you are amazing.
Thanks for another one!
Very yummy in all the right places! I hope you’ll add more to this one! Thank you!
I always look out for your new stories and i am never disapointed.
You should make a part two involving the bar tender from the wedding!
This was an incredible story. Good plot, well witten, and very hot. I enjoyed reading it.
I am in love with stories. All of them so romantic and erotic. I even sometimes want that they are all real.
I hope you make a sequel to this story i hope more bells get rung.I really love reading lesbian stories and yours are good.
Hi i really liked Story, totally great
i would love to hear more about these two ladies and maybe they could ahve some fun at the wedding
This story was amazing!! Couldn't put it down until I was done. Plus it reminded me of my first experience with an older woman!
Thank you 😊
That was one of the best stories I have ever read. Like someone else said I couldn't put it down until I read the entire story. I hope you add a 2nd part to it sometime in the future.
I absolutely loved your story. Great characters, engaging story with a realistic feel to it. I do hope you will do a sequel or an epilogue for this story.
A truly great story one of the best I’ve read in a long time. Please write further parts.
Grand job, Ann. You've written some very good stories for this site but your recent tales, which have tended to be longer, have been by far the best. (Minor nit-pick: in a couple of places you got the names mixed up, eg Rachel watching Rachel coming out of the bathroom---possibly the result of typing too quickly?)
Yes baby you rang my bell. Wanna do it real time, sweet Ann - ummmmm ?
Great story
Really didn't know what to expect when I first started reading it but it gained traction with each chapter.
I especially liked the way that Rachel decided go into the bathroom and get in the shower with Audrey.
A girls first time finding out about pussy is so exciting and you hit the nail on the head with this version of a stright girl learning about pussy
Keep up the good work and continue to tell more about the two of them.
I'll be looking forward to another story about their continued life finding out about each other
Great lead up to the final pairing and sexual escapades. Was good of Rachel to tell the truth always as each occurrence led to a more harmonious outcome. Thank you for a fine tale. Or, is that tail?
What a great story this is, in that skilfully crafts together both love and lust into one wonderful package. It made me think back (a very long time back) to my first time and how. Thank you for sharing this story with the world, it has made both my cheeks wet with tears of joy as well as making other parts of me wet as well.
Your portrayal of both protagonists was masterly, as was the story-telling. I loved this.
Great storytelling! And great portrayal of sensitive lesbian relationships and lovemaking!
Beautifully told, so romantic and just as erotic. Thank you for a wonderful story.
Well you have outdone yourself once again! Very well done, engaging, carefully crafted! Hot scenes full of passion! Well developed characters! My lover and I have so much fun making love while reading the story to each other!
All the best,
Kathy
Audrey is the type of babe that makes lesbianism worth everything when two women engaging in intimate and sensual lovemaking beautiful. All women should at least have an experience in making love to a woman.
As an 82yo man who has loved several women and am currently with a very sensual 59 yo Chinese woman I loved your story of discovery for the younger woman. I love the sensuality of women's sexuality when allowed full uninhibited expression.
Curiously, do straight women exist or are all women repressed lesbians? To the person who thinks all women should have a lesbian experience, by the same logic, shouldn't all women experience a man? Try saying it out loud. It sounds as ridiculous as you fear. Why are lesbians so obsessed with straight women?
Let's conduct an experiment. If a man propositions a woman and she rebuffs him, stating that she's a lesbian, wouldn't you expect the man to back off out of respect? Of course you would. If he didn't, he'd be a jerk. Then why don't lesbians seemingly afford straight women the same respect? Yet, every lesbian story on this site shows lesbians seducing straight women without fail? Are all those stories wish fulfillment or propaganda? Thankfully for the continued existence of the human race, you're wrong.