All Comments on 'You Can't Spell Humiliate Without...'

This is rape.

This belongs in nonconsent not bdsm but great story

Definitely not BDSM. More like a fantasy of someone that knows little or nothing about BDSM. Non-consent would be a better fit.

Because of the title and teaser. Sure you need h-ate to spell humiliate but come on. Anyways, great story, need better titles, and probably belongs in nonconsent.

As people have correctly pointed out, I've not captured the reality of a BDSM relationship and consequently this is in the wrong category. I'm going to work out how to move it

How does she address her feeling of shame? Will she do the obvious right thing and call him out on rape and maybe, even better, call the police? If not, is she really a maso sub coming out of the closet, i.e. was before hiding her attraction behind her supposed hateful feelings? Did he know or is just an aggressive bully / risk taker?

How does their relationship evolve? More humiliation to come? Will he take her on as a sub - and straighten out her apartment and life or leading her down a path of degradation and (self-)destruction? What about work?` Will she simply drop out or will there be interesting interactions with colleagues?

So many questions after such a short story. That signals something, doesn't it? The sparse text does does indeed spark some magic, IMHO. So do not erase this magic in any revision. Better build on it and gift Yourself, and us poor unimaginative readers, with a similarly well-inspired sequel.

Best regards, S.

PS Still wondering about the title ... that denouement alone deserves a sequel.

No other word for it

Libtard “values” are destroying society so I’m glad the main character was humiliated and fucked lol

I like this one. He's tamed her now. She lies there unable to move, he grabs her chin and turns her face towards him, she looks straight through him, tears in her eyes, her face blushes with shame, he says "You do as I tell you from now on bitch! You're mine, or I rat on you. See you Monday, make sure you're there!". She quietly says in an exhausted weak voice "In your …. dreams …. you bastard". Steve laughs as he leaves.

She still hates his guts, but all he has to do is pick her up, drape her across his knees and soon she's his once more, still kicking and screaming but nonetheless his, and she knows it, and hates herself for it - R

hated the ending unfinished stories what happened next ? he left evidence she could get him to jail

Excellent!

One of the very best spanking/domination/humilation-stories ever.

5*****

Excellent!

One of the very best spanking-stories ever!

5*****

Tell me why Caitlin needed a spanking and then be raped? This is not erotic it abuse.